My first post to this site.

My first attempt to commentate on my game play only. It is brutal but they will get better. I hope you enjoy!


Also please check out my youtube channel.
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its a bit boring and you dont really have the voice for commentating. But that dose not mean you cant improve you just have to make thing more interesting and try commentating when your playing the game it felt like you where just giving me tips on how to play.

Feralwargaming wrote:Feralwargaming

I agree with you. It was my first video and it shows. It is definitely an instructional video. My next commentary will be a lot different.

zZzZzZzZz, you might be able to sell this to hypnotists, to help people zone out, the video footage is not bad, but you killed it by not having a script or at least a common idea to stick too. you can avoid things like I run up here place a claymore just so I can reload. I'd listen to a few football commentaries, stick to the center of the maps so you can get more kills quickly and try to make it exciting, a few sound effects might not hurt either. Good Luck.