New Intro, Feedback needed

Super Short Clip, if you watch please leave some feedback

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I'd prefer if you were to watch in full-screen, but I'll embed for the people who have slow internet connections.

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I just recently purchased after effects.

I've been playing around with it and this is the first intro I've produced that was semi-high quality. I could really use some feedback.

A few notes:

• The contrast on low-end or some older stock graphic cards might make the text blend to much with the background, try switching the video to 480p if this is a problem (full screen might help too)
  
• This shouldn't be a problem on computers with high-end graphic cards and better processors. If it is, switch to HD, 720 or 1080. For some reason I can't get it to load in this setting.
• Originally the ending of it faded to black, which wasn't dramatic enough, this current ending may be too dramatic. I couldn't figure out what would be a good middle ground
• I have a few different sound effects I was playing around with, I liked this the most, but it's not perfect, any Ideas?
• I tried to keep it real short, I had it down to 3-4 seconds but made it a little longer because it was too fast to see what was happening.

Please leave some feedback anything will help. Except for insults, or random animals.